tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8701931726893364478.post405260525951215154..comments2023-06-14T03:38:10.644-07:00Comments on Seeds of Coriander: The RedwoodsAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04680615822666921191noreply@blogger.comBlogger19125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8701931726893364478.post-3655507348842043292013-02-03T19:09:07.731-08:002013-02-03T19:09:07.731-08:00"Until we are rediscovered, we only have our ..."Until we are rediscovered, we only have our whispered memories." Perfect ending...Marie Nicolehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02349867233197745366noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8701931726893364478.post-16949074124327206732013-02-02T08:43:31.122-08:002013-02-02T08:43:31.122-08:00As ancient as trees can get, it must be a treasur...As ancient as trees can get, it must be a treasure to remember the past, when all that stretches ahead is endless whiteness. Beautiful job!TMWHickmanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11099277984216556857noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8701931726893364478.post-39501654102040061282013-02-01T17:58:05.281-08:002013-02-01T17:58:05.281-08:00The yearning here is heartbreaking. This is so goo...The yearning here is heartbreaking. This is so good. Beautiful descriptions. I sigh with the trees. Reneehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00955772837133239769noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8701931726893364478.post-47710322805483948682013-02-01T09:24:32.247-08:002013-02-01T09:24:32.247-08:00Hi Cheney, and thank you! I have found that I love...Hi Cheney, and thank you! I have found that I love writing from different perspectives, as it helps me feel more "me" in the end... If that makes sense. :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04680615822666921191noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8701931726893364478.post-14111229599517910482013-01-31T16:37:52.526-08:002013-01-31T16:37:52.526-08:00Awesome. Very interesting, something written from ...Awesome. Very interesting, something written from the perspective of a tree. I never would have thought of doing something like that!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08420809700240691057noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8701931726893364478.post-7074195421001767692013-01-31T15:53:42.809-08:002013-01-31T15:53:42.809-08:00Thank you so much , Shannon! I love sticking words...Thank you so much , Shannon! I love sticking words where they don't normally belong, and am happy it worked out in this case.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04680615822666921191noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8701931726893364478.post-47649800276636256902013-01-31T10:50:27.126-08:002013-01-31T10:50:27.126-08:00it's a skill to be able to use words like '...it's a skill to be able to use words like 'sarcastic' to describe a pine tree and have it make sense, but your writing flows beautifully and those dashes of otherness give it a unique flavor that i enjoyed, very muchshannonhttp://thesqueakywheelblog.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8701931726893364478.post-50715147229411971882013-01-30T20:20:49.682-08:002013-01-30T20:20:49.682-08:00Thank you kindly, Carrie! I look forward to contin...Thank you kindly, Carrie! I look forward to continuing this tale, even if only briefly. Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04680615822666921191noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8701931726893364478.post-6769757321722601862013-01-30T20:19:23.804-08:002013-01-30T20:19:23.804-08:00Thank you so very much for reading, and your kind ...Thank you so very much for reading, and your kind comment! I hoped to get that right. :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04680615822666921191noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8701931726893364478.post-33257626033922774892013-01-30T20:17:49.128-08:002013-01-30T20:17:49.128-08:00Thank you, Angela. Remembering is much harder some...Thank you, Angela. Remembering is much harder sometimes.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04680615822666921191noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8701931726893364478.post-3902032103883118092013-01-30T20:16:30.696-08:002013-01-30T20:16:30.696-08:00Thank you, Kir. Standing in a redwood grove does i...Thank you, Kir. Standing in a redwood grove does inspire whispers. Perhaps that will be a prequel.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04680615822666921191noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8701931726893364478.post-1505847585250895062013-01-30T20:14:59.197-08:002013-01-30T20:14:59.197-08:00Thank you, Stacey! I think I may continue this one...Thank you, Stacey! I think I may continue this one. :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04680615822666921191noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8701931726893364478.post-65906337599895662922013-01-30T20:14:15.888-08:002013-01-30T20:14:15.888-08:00Thanks, Eric! I really have discovered a love for ...Thanks, Eric! I really have discovered a love for writing as a non-human, and may take this to a new chapter.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04680615822666921191noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8701931726893364478.post-72358965944999634492013-01-30T15:11:55.275-08:002013-01-30T15:11:55.275-08:00fabulous imagery and haunting use of prose to make...fabulous imagery and haunting use of prose to make the reader really feel for the protagonist of this...even if its not 'human'<br /><br />Well done!Carriehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03472645003197467754noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8701931726893364478.post-39596252149486901542013-01-30T10:01:13.703-08:002013-01-30T10:01:13.703-08:00The description of the "used to be" is s...The description of the "used to be" is stunning. Nicely done!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8701931726893364478.post-8177105534576416952013-01-30T09:02:32.901-08:002013-01-30T09:02:32.901-08:00Your description is absolutely aching in this piec...Your description is absolutely aching in this piece. The idea that it can be harder to remember than forget is so true... for trees and for people.angelahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14974137283220034062noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8701931726893364478.post-3984265464656507672013-01-30T07:07:35.519-08:002013-01-30T07:07:35.519-08:00Oh wow, this was so haunting and sad, as if you ha...Oh wow, this was so haunting and sad, as if you have to read it in whispers, not a full voice. <br />I felt the loss, the missing pieces , you wrote them just right. <br /><br />Kirhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17894442143508446312noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8701931726893364478.post-33100476972583114862013-01-30T07:04:49.926-08:002013-01-30T07:04:49.926-08:00So intriguing. I love your description throughout ...So intriguing. I love your description throughout this piece. It makes me want more.<br />Staceyhttp://www.staceysmotheringmoments.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8701931726893364478.post-86363487326147461522013-01-30T06:58:10.560-08:002013-01-30T06:58:10.560-08:00Wow. I love reading stories told from a non-human ...Wow. I love reading stories told from a non-human perspective and you have done a marvelous job!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15084816466096546209noreply@blogger.com