Friday, January 11, 2013

Two Special Words - [Trifextra 50]



The heaviness vanished
That had taken over
Leaving her dampened and diminished

The darkness dissipated
In a split second

Light filled her eyes
The room
Her heart

With two beautiful words
“You’re hired.”





"This weekend we're asking for 33 words about a new beginning."

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32 comments:

  1. THIS is gorgeous my friend. Yes, I love that moment of ELATION and your words brought it right to me.

    ALSO, because I know it's based on TRUE LIFE events..CONGRATULATIONS!!

    xo

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  2. A great capturing of a feeling that I too know so well. Based on Kir's comment, congrats!!

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  3. That is a beautiful phrase indeed. Well done!

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  4. That's a pretty great beginning.

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    1. Beginnings are sometimes scary, but this is one I will always be grateful for. :)

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  5. Nice alliteration! And what a wonderful last line!

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    1. Thanks! I didn't catch the alliteration until you mentioned it. LOL

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  6. yay! I remember the day I was hired for my current job . . . elation, trepidation, joy, fear . . . new beginning indeed

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  7. How wonderful those words can be!

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  8. Two words I'd love to hear too.

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  9. A new job is the ultimate new beginning. Congratulations!

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  10. How well you have described the elation,the freedom,the joy on being hired-especially in these difficult economic times:-)

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    1. Thank you. I hope that everyone in The Search will soon feel the same.

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  11. Beautifully written! Love the bit about the light filling her eyes, the room and her heart - gorgeous!

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    1. Thank you! It was like I was glowing from the inside out :)

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  12. I loved the twist at the end. A great beginning indeed!

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  13. I love this. Not what I expected at the end but reading it reminded me of my own life and made me smile ear to ear.

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    1. I'm happy to provide a smile or two!

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  14. Congrats! I love the way you expressed this.

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  15. With two beautiful words
    “You’re hired.”

    I long to hear those precious words. I think a lot of us out there are looking to be wooed by someone from an HR department these days.

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    1. I will keep you in my thoughts and hope that you soon hear those words.

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